Looking good there Steve
I'll keep out of the technical debate, but on the presentation side I think the closer the diagram can get to a top down view of an actual Bongo layout, with front of car at top of drawing, the easier it ought to be to follow as that is the convention that people are used to. In the main, that simply means rotating the diagram through 180 degrees, though I notice the header tank needs moving to the other side in order to be correct.
I would also do a bit more labelling of components (engine block, turbo, thermostat etc.) - labels around edge of diagram and with arrows pointing to component would do if that allows larger labels (ageing eyesight

) and/or helps keep the diagram itself free of clutter.
You might be able to put a few advisory footnotes on the diagram e.g:
*Label to header tank could say that fitting an LCA is advisable + where to buy
* Label to thermostat could advise that it fails in closed position, plus advising replacement as part of coolant change, if there is any doubt about its age/condition.
* Label to radiator could advise on known problems to check on (plastic around rad. cap can crack and leak, rad. can sludge up etc.)
* Best (i.e. standard position recommended by Haydn) position for fitting TM2 sensor probe could be shown, plus sugested range for 'normal' temps measured at that point
* Temp sender position could be shown, in case anyone wishes to access/replace/modify
Finally, a ghost outline of the vehicle itself (faint grey) would top it off nicely. It helps identify roughly where on the real vehicle the components are situated.
3D perspective drawing would be great and would allow pump and fanbelts to be shown 'as they are' but I imagine that's well beyond the capability of the drawing software/package so I'm just expressing sihful thinking here.
The suggestions above are all aimed at getting max. value out of the drawing. If the final product allowed people to understand how the system works, gain awareness of how to keep the system in good nick, and go to their car and identify the actual components, then it would be a comprehensively valuable diagram. Clearly there's a limit to what you can get on one diagram without cluttering it, but thats the fun and challenge of trying to design a really good drawing. I could see a really good final product being worthy of consideration for printing on decent paper as an A3 folded to A4 or A5 item, produced by the Bongo shop and offered for sale for use in conjuction with the workshop manual (or just as a thing of beauty and guidance in its own right). It would be the cherry on the cake of course if Mazda agreed to verify the diagram and its flow details as being correct (please Mazda

)
Fantastic project - well done to you for tackling it
